During the weekends, my dad sisters and I went to Kmart to buy some clothes and shoes for my sister for her school camp. Before we left, we had to get changed because we were wearing dirty clothes. After that, we left the house. We went in my dad’s small and grey car. I was very happy and excited about going to Kmart.
It took us 27 minutes to get there. While my dad was driving us to Kmart, my sister Heneliena and I played paper, scissors and rock in the car. Heneliena and I had a lot of fun playing paper, scissors and rock. My sister kept winning.
Before we knew it, we have arrived at our destination. Heneliena and I slowly hopped out of the car and waited patiently on the footpath for my other sisters to come out. After they came out of the car, we walked inside the shop. My sister hastily grabbed a trolley for her to put the clothes and shoes in.
Next, I walked with my sister to go and pick out some clothes and shoes for her to take to her school camp. I asked my sister if she wanted to take some shorts to her school camp and she said, ‘‘Yes!’’ So I took some shorts to my sister for her to put in the trolley. Then I asked my sister if I could buy some boots, jeans and a T-shirt for her and she said, ‘‘Yes!’’ again.
After my sister bought all the clothes and the shoes that she needed, we went to pay for them at the counter. While my dad and my older sister was paying for the clothes and the shoes, my other sisters and I waited for them in the car.
After that we went back home and we saw a lot buildings on the way home.
I had a great time going to Kmart with my dad and my sisters. Next time I hope we go to Kmart again because there were a lot of things in Kmart that I wanted to look at.
Learning intention: We are learning to understand and use descriptive language in my writing.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I use adverbs to describe my shopping trip to Kmart.
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