Going to the Beach!

In the holidays, I went to the beach with my family. When we got to the beach we wanted to play on the park first. I played on the slide and it was so much fun. Then my dad took my mum home because it was raining. My dad said that we needed to wait at the beach until he comes back.

When my dad came back, he told us  to swim some more. When  we got in the water, my dad
and I went to the deep end. It was very deep so hopped on my dad's back because I felt
scared.

Then it was time to go home. I had a fun time at the beach. Next time, I would like to go to a different
beach.

Learning intention: We are learning to use the structure of a recount correctly. 
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write the orientation, followed by the body and then the conclusion.