Have you ever been to the park before?

In the weekend my friend,brother and sister and I were playing outside.My little sister,friend and I
had a handstand competition. My older brother and sister were playing tag and my older brother was the tagger. After we played for a bit my friend and I went to her house because it was just next door.

When we got to her house we went inside a big garage.I asked my little sister if she wanted to play with us at my friends house and she said "Yes".When she came over I asked my friend and my little sister if would like to play shopping. They both said "Yes" at the same time.

My friend was the shop keeper.We used lids and paper as our money.Then we got bored so we asked our older brother and sister if they would like to play hide and down go seek and they said "Yes".I wanted to count so I went to the back yard and started counting down.

When I finished counting down, I went to look for them. I found my friend first,then my older sister then my older brother and I found little sister last. Then my mum called our names for us to go inside and have dinner.We had fish and chips. I felt thirsty so I drank water.After that I went to have a shower because I was sweaty. When I finished having a shower,I got changed and then I went to bed because I was tired.

I would like to play a different game next time because the games that we played weren't very interesting.

Learning intention: We are learning to use the structure of a recount correctly. 
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write the orientation, followed by the body and then the conclusion.